For Literacy we sometimes get the opportunity to do some free writing. This is my story, what I did well was be creative with my story line, what I need to work on is longer sentences and more punctuation. Thank you for taking the time to read, please leave some feedback.
Jason's Nightmare!
One day on a dark stormy night Jason 'the killer' was reloading a shotgun in front of someone's house. He kicked down the door and there was a fragile, little old grandma with a AK47 pointing right at his head. Jason the killer screamed in horror Jason ran of scared and the grandma said " don't mess with me sunny!". Never had Jason felt so much fear in his life!
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