In writing i have bean doing persuasive writing about ads.This is the cause i'm supporting.
Friday, August 2, 2019
save the ocean from the rubbish
In writing i have bean doing persuasive writing about ads.This is the cause i'm supporting.
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Hi i’m Abigail from Parkview Parua School.
ReplyDeleteI loved this because we need to save the planet and you’re right the sea has a lot of rubbish.
This reminded me of how endangered sea creatures are now days.
Next time, you could say why people need to save the sea.
Why did you put two pieces of rubbish when there ‘s 1000 bits of rubbish in the sea?
Ola, i like how you used persuasive writing.
ReplyDeletethank you cristiano
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